First of all, it is super fucking hot. But it's also so nicely written, and the worldbuilding is all great. The description of the city and its inhabitants, of Aiba and his apartment and all his knick-knacks, it's all wonderfully descriptive and clear without being too much. There is never a point where it feels like you're telling me what this place is like or what's going on -- I feel like I'm just seeing it as Sho sees it. It's all very natural and flows really nicely.
But then, also: IT IS SUPER FUCKING HOT. Uuuugh seriously it's just. yes. I love how straightforward and delighted Aiba is, and how simultaneously freaked out and intrigued Sho is, and everything is just SO CRAZY HOT. Hahaha I am pretty sure I know which part you were talking about when you said there was something I was definitely going to like, and you were right, I enjoyed that part very very much.
Oh man, I just. Yes. This whole thing is so fabulous and amazing and hot and wonderful and I'm so glad you wrote it and posted it and are going to write more in this universe and aaahhhh. ♥~♥
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First of all, it is super fucking hot. But it's also so nicely written, and the worldbuilding is all great. The description of the city and its inhabitants, of Aiba and his apartment and all his knick-knacks, it's all wonderfully descriptive and clear without being too much. There is never a point where it feels like you're telling me what this place is like or what's going on -- I feel like I'm just seeing it as Sho sees it. It's all very natural and flows really nicely.
But then, also: IT IS SUPER FUCKING HOT. Uuuugh seriously it's just. yes. I love how straightforward and delighted Aiba is, and how simultaneously freaked out and intrigued Sho is, and everything is just SO CRAZY HOT. Hahaha I am pretty sure I know which part you were talking about when you said there was something I was definitely going to like, and you were right, I enjoyed that part very very much.
Oh man, I just. Yes. This whole thing is so fabulous and amazing and hot and wonderful and I'm so glad you wrote it and posted it and are going to write more in this universe and aaahhhh. ♥~♥
A thousand hearts for you, lady. ALL THE HEARTS.